Feelings Felt Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Feelings Felt

Rating: 4.5


The foot prints bloom as flowers,
When you come closer.
The merry thoughts loom as shower,
When you speak sweeter.
The earning heart beats in pleasure,
When you look sharper.
As the needy has found a treasure,
the loving hearts found theirs.

After the rain, things look clearer,
as the dusty confusion cleaned.
After finding theirs, people may wonder,
Whether the gift be kept.
Enchantment of everything disappear,
as the two doves in the window.
Just the two set off into the blue yonder,
as the elders have done earlier.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Besa Dede 27 March 2012

Beautiful poem, written with a lot of passion and imagination. I pictured the foot prints turn in bloomed flowers, and the spirit symbolically flying away with the doves flight, through the open window. Thank you for sharing.

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Raj Arumugam 21 March 2012

love the imagery in this poem, VS

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Harindhar Reddy 20 March 2012

Simply amazing thought is this poem! A very good one easy to understand and read it like approaching the next door girl............ I hope you write many more poems like this.10+++++++++++++

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