Felix, My Dearest Love Poem by San Antonio Can! High School

Felix, My Dearest Love

Rating: 3.6


Felix,
You are always in my dreams
Like an angel in the night.
You are courageous,
A gentle and swift dolphin of a man,
A brave and soaring eagle of a human being,
A playful and joyful child in spring’s fields.

How I miss you now that you are gone.
If only you were here with me,
Then everything would be all right.
The stars would shine bright again,
And I would laugh, laugh like a young woman
Overcome with affection for her true love.

-Beth Sterner

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 26 September 2006

Beth: a stellar rite of Love....and well placed verbage........G

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San Antonio Can High School 18 September 2006

San Antonio Can High School (9/18/2006 3: 48: 00 PM) I THINK THAT'S A REALLY NICE AND DEEP POEM! MONIQUE RODRIGUEZ- 16, FEMALE

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Tracey Collins 18 September 2006

wow what a nice rite about a true love......

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Scarlett Treat 18 September 2006

Your name caught my eye, because I have a son living in S.A., but the poem was well worth the trip. If Mr. Jackson is your teacher, then he has done a fine job, both of teaching you (your phrasing is fresh and lovely!) , and of encouraging you and others to post your work for outside feedback. Well done, San Antonio Can! !

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San Antonio Can High School 18 September 2006

Beth, this is really a lovely poem, and well done. Thank you for being the first student to submit work to the site. Sincerely, Mr. Jackson

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