Fighting Poem by Joscelyn Alderdice

Fighting

Rating: 5.0


Everything seems to be a waste
Things are falling apart
Maybe it should just be erased
Its beginning to hurt my heart

Things are just going nowhere
I'm trying but it doesn't work
I can't deal with this affair
I think I might go berserk

People are always fighting
No one seems to get along
Sometimes I wish they were struck by lightning
Nothing can belong

I hate when this happens
I can't fix this problem
It never ends
They are the problem its all them

Maybe Tyron's right
Maybe there is no point
It'll never be alright
I just always disappoint

I want it to keep going
I want it to be a never ending thing
I hope it will keep growing
No more lying

This has to work!
We can't give up!
There's no time to be a jerk!
We can't break our cup!

31st March,2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

the rhythm is quite astonishing.. the theme spectacular..bravo

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anurag duggal 14 April 2009

you are my favourite poet for ur poem are an easy read...........simplicity is beauty

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Eyan Desir 03 April 2009

I like the flow It was easy reading and I liked the message the poem...tells 8+2=10s

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