Final Call Poem by Doom & Gloom

Final Call

Rating: 2.7


Included in a million dreams
My presence now begins to fade
As tears descend upon my seems
My life decision has been made
Decomposed and unfulfilled
The structure of myself relents
Revenge attained by those I killed
Into the pit I’m blindly sent
A single piece will bind me fast
A single light in darkness depth
An end to future, present past
All is dust, nothing kept
Show me something to keep me sane
Revel to me a dream now dead
Upon my lips a whispered name
Life exhaled with nothing said

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 26 June 2007

Life does not end there, it must move on dude. Good write.

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Marty Zenthoefer 26 May 2007

i'll make interpretation short. I would say that this killer is filled with rage at himself. Although his devilish side is saying to him no to kill himself. Although in his relaxing rage he slowly let's the guilt tear him from inside out. When it reaches the outside, the final call is made.

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