Doom and Gloom

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Final Call - Poem by Doom and Gloom

Included in a million dreams
My presence now begins to fade
As tears descend upon my seems
My life decision has been made
Decomposed and unfulfilled
The structure of myself relents
Revenge attained by those I killed
Into the pit I’m blindly sent
A single piece will bind me fast
A single light in darkness depth
An end to future, present past
All is dust, nothing kept
Show me something to keep me sane
Revel to me a dream now dead
Upon my lips a whispered name
Life exhaled with nothing said


Comments about Final Call by Doom and Gloom

  • (6/26/2007 11:34:00 PM)

    Life does not end there, it must move on dude. Good write. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/26/2007 6:53:00 AM)

    i'll make interpretation short. I would say that this killer is filled with rage at himself. Although his devilish side is saying to him no to kill himself. Although in his relaxing rage he slowly let's the guilt tear him from inside out. When it reaches the outside, the final call is made. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011


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