Betrayal Poem by Doom & Gloom

LOVE the intro! Such sarcasm 'good day to thee my worthless friend' i daresay it should be the title and Oft repeated in the mantra! Wish i had created the line myself!

I find this poem really interesting. Who is the friend that is portrayed in this poem? Because he(it?) hasn't just hurt you, but also numerous others that was 'left for dead' by him. What did he do to inflict so much suffering(death?) and hurt on so many people? Hmm...: -)

What is betrayal? Lemme hear YOUR version, and does it mean someone is 'betraying' if they sleep with someone else when they're 'with' someone they 'say' they 'love? ' What is that considered?

i love this poem.. it is deeply moving and very profound.. i think you have a wonderful way with words and conveying emotion.. i cant wait to read more :) xx

Ouch! I think this is how friends felt when I left South Africa.

The peotry is excellent but the voice not.

The agony of the human condition! Excellent.

Great stuff, cut down the middle and left floundering. well written! ! it sorts out the would be's and the fakers...from the pure of heart.

Seems like a very effective Reverse Psychology to me to attract attention from friends who start to ignore our presence. Very good piece though.10 for me.

Your wit and sarcasm made me laugh. Many of us have non-friends deserving of those exact words.