Break Some More Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Break Some More

Rating: 4.5


broken pieces
fall to the floor
shatter everywhere
and break some more

tears fall slowly
down my face
memories repeating
im unable to erase

feeling so lonely
lost in the quiet
piece by piece
i pick them up again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 17 January 2009

Very nicely written. Everything is there to tell the story from beginning to end. The rhythm of the reading is smooth and glides along.

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Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

A great poem again a wonderfull job

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Vilma Xelin 20 August 2008

Again, you are a hopefull person.... you are broken, and still you are thinking on recovery... you are hurt but you can think even in revenge, in hate... I admire you!

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