Sunday, June 13, 2010

Final Straw

Rating: 4.0
Welcome to the final straw.
You know you can't have them all.
Still you took each one-by-one,
and kept them now you have a ton.

So you pick me up; the final straw,
but your hands are full and so I fall.
You want them all and so you fall,
Fall to catch the final straw.
Fall, you fall.
And as you fall,
You lose them all.
All, except, the final straw.
Emma Hasel
Logan S 21 June 2010
Great job said before, it is thought provoking.
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Kial Whitmire 21 June 2010
Wow, who would have thought those words would have merged into a coaxing solace for me. Great job and keep them coming.
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Leila Mass 18 June 2010
I liked this poem, it was interesting. I hope to see more coming! :) If you could, can you please take the time to read a couple of my poems. -Leila
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Jess Silva 17 June 2010
Hey Emily, I think this a good poem, its thought provoking. well done :)
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David Hayes 14 June 2010
Wow! That was amazing. Got any more poems waiting to happen?
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