Saturday, July 19, 2008

Final Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stuck in the present, no future or past
Is this the beginning of the end at last?

Daren’t look back to the trouble and plight
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Brian 'Peza' Perrins
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 February 2009

The final thoughts is not your final but a game played constantly by a very disturbed and unstable mind.Great piece Brian.

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Catrina Heart 19 July 2008

A common view of a rehabilitation center.......great imagery, nice poem.

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