Final Wish Poem by Lance Carthen

Final Wish

Rating: 4.5


He writes himself to death...
Never to see another moon.
A victim to the shadows.
The devils reach always loomed.
Hovering round him, like darkened gallows
A prayer too late, too soon.
Had he passed on tommorow.
His wish would have come true.
But now he lay motionless...
Defeated by life and abused.
In the midst of writing a final poem...
about a wish coming true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Fegley 19 October 2006

What a poem of woe and forlorn Lance. I like it... Laters...Joshua.

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Lance Carthen

Lance Carthen

Mineral Wells, TX
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