Finally As Poem Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Finally As Poem

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It always happens
Some of the ideas misses even
Not by default
But by not strongly built

Many ideas cross over mind
They must be immediately placed
In its place and stored
Else it may soon vapor

I found many times
Same situation sometimes
But I may note down title and forget
So next day those ideas are brought out

It so happens
They are not remembered even
When you try to recollect
With pen in hand and start

Remember it was treasure
Once missed means gone for ever
That piece is lost and not to strike again
It will be hidden treasure and may remain

It is personal experience
Keep no thought for tomorrow by chance
It will never occur to find in poem’s form
It must be made finally as poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

It always happens Some of the ideas misses even Not by default

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Lucette Bailliet likes this. Lucette Bailliet Totally agree wit you there! 23 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Ruby BLess than a minute ago very good poem, some of your english needs a little work though

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

a poet`s realization............. PARTHA SARATHI PAULLess than a minute ago great ever, sir. Comment +1 brilliant

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

a poet`s realization............. PARTHA SARATHI PAULLess than a minute ago great ever, sir. Comment +1 brilliant

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Scott Ransopher and Lucette Bailliet like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

Ruby BLess than a minute ago very good poem, some of your english needs a little work though

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2013

finally as poem, very good write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

GEURRU I thought I was the only one experiencing what you just described; at least I know there are two of us now. Anymore else?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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