Finally Broken Comments

Moreover, I find a great flow from top to bottom! The stanzas are meticulously planned! I vote this poem with a 10

A thought provoking poem! I feel the undertone..how painful it is! The last stanza is the epitome of your poem! I liked this poem as it compelled me to realise the expression! Very nicely penned!

I find a lot of your rhymes subtle and skillful, esp near the top of the poem. You describe a lot of the interpersonal games very well! You have awareness and writing skills this person could never take away, and a spirit that lives, underneath what's happened, though it may not feel that way now.

I felt this poem. Relationships are about two people seeing how clever they can be at hurting each other. I hope you get your rainbow back.