~ Finally Niv Is In Petrified Punctuation ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Finally Niv Is In Petrified Punctuation ~
Ms. Nivedita
29 October 2010

Psychic erosion
Myopic hibernation
Heart’s deflation
Soul’s corrosion
Poet’s induration!

Editors in contemplation
Printers in obfuscation
Poetry in delirious delusion
Readers in confusion!

Finally Niv is in petrified Punctuation.
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Comments about ~ Finally Niv Is In Petrified Punctuation ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Lee Mack (11/11/2014 9:03:00 PM)

    Hi is just and as high without trailing off into punctuation Still around with poetic hulu hoops...
    too few female moments to take away the male schadenfruede...
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  • (5/27/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    Caustic remark

    In one canvas finely loomed and worded

    Scenario indeed very applicative...

    Nice 'after-Reading-shock'
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  • (5/24/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    Wow! ! Smells great Wow

    Agree with Photo...Please don't go in hibernation

    Canvas of poetry is run and explore more
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  • (5/23/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    Oh no Dear Poet please don't go in 'Petrified Punctuation in any walks of life...please

    Total scenario very aptly portrayed in the arena of Poetry

    Total addressing...with punch and stings of satire...very well done tenner ++
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  • (5/15/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    'Poet’s induration! ' This is the zing point

    Out of induration poetry flows better

    Best poets are all indurated in feelings and out come and best poetry is crafted

    Here poet related all most all factors related with poetry apart for poet she has included editor printer too

    Total addressing...a kind of satire in poetic canvas with in-built truths

    Thanks for sharing
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  • (5/14/2012 11:41:00 AM)

    'Poetry in delirious delusion/Readers in confusion! '

    Poetry is always delirium and Poets are delirious because to understand poetry special mind-set is required

    I know all poetry I can't understand...seems to me as delirium

    Fortunately This I understood

    And considering overall situation Poet finished with, 'Finally Niv is in petrified Punctuation'...and she felt all the difficulties good conception...thanks for sharing
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  • (5/2/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    Wow...what an Idea

    Excellent rhyming

    '...Poetry in delirious delusion/...'Readers in confusion!

    'Finally Niv is in petrified Punctuation.'

    O no Dear Poet come out of 'petrified Punctuation.'

    Offer us cerebrate poetries

    Light flavor... deep impact

    Good one...10+
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  • Joub Kahuria (3/26/2012 12:46:00 PM)

    you really have something with words......i like it bravo (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2011 2:12:00 AM)

    'Readers in confusion'.........thats me.......... I am back on poemhunter, so i am looking forward to reading your poems again (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2010 11:53:00 AM)

    Having readers in confusion is no stranger to you Niv, and this poem is no exception. I do understand it better than most and find the rhyming exceptional. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (11/22/2010 5:16:00 AM)

    Lovely poem with nice rhyme.
    Well penned
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (11/11/2010 1:01:00 AM)

    Yet induction is left aside from the word-list above. Its effect, that is induction effect, makes a poet busy to a new journey to give the prior thoughts another shape by the way of finest expression. Petrified punctuation...... in one sense, where all the marks to make stop have been terrified by the inner creative strength of a poet, as if the poet herself has become such a stopless runner in the field of poetry. In another sense, punctuation has been tranformed into the spirit of the poet where stops are relative. 'Finally Niv is in petrified Punctuation.' Both the meanings are appreciating. So many hazards of heart, hell, editors, savers, terminators are not at all frustrating when a poet know her 'liquid soul' carries all such discharges age after age, day by day, moment after moments to and from infinity. We have to live, and its a blessing we have got a creative quality, this much............Well written with your own style and diction. I put my choice as 10/10.

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  • Bert Bell (11/4/2010 1:46:00 AM)

    Bravo, Niv. Very clever and well thought out.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2010 7:28:00 PM)

    i loved the poem keep amazing us. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (11/3/2010 8:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with nice rhyme.
    Well penned
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • Niken Kusuma Wardani (11/3/2010 12:49:00 AM)

    Good poem with nice rhyme, keep on writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/2/2010 5:55:00 AM)

    A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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  • (11/2/2010 4:09:00 AM)

    Very well written! (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2010 2:01:00 AM)

    An amusing poem..indeed! (Report) Reply

  • C.n.prem Kumar (10/30/2010 12:53:00 AM)

    A very true poem with the sharpness of a sword. It cuts through the follies and foibles of poetic arena. Excellent work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 29, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 30, 2010

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