~ Captivate Me ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

I see what you are going for here...your attempt at alliteration is bold, but, yet, there should be some sense of meaning, somthing tying it all together. For the most part....I don't get it? ? ?

flow and wordplay is beautiful.emotional ink.liked it.

i went looking for your poem 'oxymoron', to which you had invited me, but i didn't find it. forgive me silence and my absence from pm. the first stanza of your write is like the comedy of faded spring - efface not treaded flowers. this is exquisite, not to smother our erors, our mistakes, our follies, but to give them a new life in our living memory. I like it a lot.

I really like this poem, i love the way it is worded as well, i think you are wonderful poet.

WritteN with zest, celebrating the zeitgeist..living the moments and the unfathomable thoughts...linking with the unseen link which is the umbilical chord for the humanity and life...wow is the word for this poem

Beautiful poem dear poetess......thank ❤

Dear My Soul Efface not your foot prints Take back not fragrance of Treaded flowers. - - - - - - - - - - - - Hey my eventuality Visit my tryst. secretly With fragrance of trust. - - - - - - - - A wonderful poem of love , earthly and unearthly.

Experiencing one for happiness. Thank you

Hey my eventuality Visit my tryst. secretly With fragrance of trust.

beautiful words nivedita