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~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~

Rating: 4.6
~ I WATCH I WATCH I WATCH ~
Ms. Nivedita. UK
17.09.09.

Ye,
You’re standing in the:
Endless Universe,
Endless Dark,
Endless Light.
Ye,
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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 September 2020
poetic art at the highest
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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2018
Ye, Silent Universe Silent Dark, Silent Light Embosom Your foot prints When minstrel oozing From Your harp. Achefully Joyfully I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope. - - -A mesmerizing piece of writing.
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Sranisha Francis 21 September 2015
very good words...........
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Melvina Germain 28 June 2015
I'm definitely immersed within the universe and to me that is a Blessing as there is much to love and share. The beyond has always been intriguing to me. Excellent poem Nivedita.....
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lost soul 03 May 2011
I can identify with your feelings for I am indeed 'a lost soul' 'standing beyond the boundaries of Life and Death' and yes- I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope.' your poem has an erie quality to it, very effective
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Louis Cecile 20 September 2010
Nicely work short piece that opens up the thought of watching something of great purpose coming. Good work.
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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2010
I also watch the endless dark light night of universe expanding silences eternally talk to me speak with me flows forth my soul
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David Beckham 24 August 2010
The beauty of the world around us. In silence we all take it in and watch. This is deep with lots of meanings. Thanks for sharing
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Marieta Maglas 11 August 2010
This was a very intense piece, very well conceived...
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Milica Franchi De Luri 05 August 2010
I watch, i watch, i watch........it is all that you can do......the magnitude of it all is overpowering......10
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