~ I WATCH I WATCH I WATCH ~
Ms. Nivedita. UK
17.09.09.
Ye,
You’re standing in the:
Endless Universe,
Endless Dark,
Endless Light.
Ye,
You’re standing beyond the:
Boundaries of Life and Death.
Ye,
Silent Universe
Silent Dark,
Silent Light
Embosom Your foot prints
When minstrel oozing
From Your harp.
Achefully Joyfully
I watch I watch I watch
Without any utterance
Without any hope.
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A finely penned poem, .. Captured delightfully! Thank you for sharing!
I watch, i watch, i watch........it is all that you can do......the magnitude of it all is overpowering......10
Has a prophetic touch to it. Reminds me of the ever extending universe, and the continual watchfulness of our God! Omniscience.: D
Ye, Silent Universe Silent Dark, Silent Light Embosom Your foot prints When minstrel oozing From Your harp. Achefully Joyfully I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope. - - -A mesmerizing piece of writing.
I'm definitely immersed within the universe and to me that is a Blessing as there is much to love and share. The beyond has always been intriguing to me. Excellent poem Nivedita.....
I can identify with your feelings for I am indeed 'a lost soul' 'standing beyond the boundaries of Life and Death' and yes- I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope.' your poem has an erie quality to it, very effective
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a fine poem, penned as usual by a great poet, that swept me up and carried me right into the poem on a journey to the end of the earth and finally back again. Thanks for the journey and keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn