~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~

Rating: 4.6


~ I WATCH I WATCH I WATCH ~
Ms. Nivedita. UK
17.09.09.

Ye,
You’re standing in the:
Endless Universe,
Endless Dark,
Endless Light.

Ye,
You’re standing beyond the:
Boundaries of Life and Death.

Ye,
Silent Universe
Silent Dark,
Silent Light
Embosom Your foot prints
When minstrel oozing
From Your harp.

Achefully Joyfully
I watch I watch I watch
Without any utterance
Without any hope.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 26 April 2010

This is a fine poem, penned as usual by a great poet, that swept me up and carried me right into the poem on a journey to the end of the earth and finally back again. Thanks for the journey and keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn

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Marieta Maglas 23 April 2010

A finely penned poem, .. Captured delightfully! Thank you for sharing!

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Marieta Maglas 11 August 2010

This was a very intense piece, very well conceived...

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Milica Franchi De Luri 05 August 2010

I watch, i watch, i watch........it is all that you can do......the magnitude of it all is overpowering......10

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Has a prophetic touch to it. Reminds me of the ever extending universe, and the continual watchfulness of our God! Omniscience.: D

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 September 2020

poetic art at the highest

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2018

Ye, Silent Universe Silent Dark, Silent Light Embosom Your foot prints When minstrel oozing From Your harp. Achefully Joyfully I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope. - - -A mesmerizing piece of writing.

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Sranisha Francis 21 September 2015

very good words...........

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Melvina Germain 28 June 2015

I'm definitely immersed within the universe and to me that is a Blessing as there is much to love and share. The beyond has always been intriguing to me. Excellent poem Nivedita.....

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lost soul 03 May 2011

I can identify with your feelings for I am indeed 'a lost soul' 'standing beyond the boundaries of Life and Death' and yes- I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope.' your poem has an erie quality to it, very effective

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