Find Your Mind Poem by David Darbyshire

Find Your Mind

Rating: 4.3


There is a place,
In My Mind
Were I can Go
To have a Wonderful,
Beautiful Thought
I can just close my Eyes
And be there Anytime,
Any day, Any where
So I do Dare
That all of You
Please Please go There
And have a beautiful Thought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 11 August 2006

I love that place David, it gives me a sense of peace and tranquility. Thanks again, another lovely piece.--Melvina

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Nalini Hebbar 23 June 2006

thanks for inviting...should try thinking different thoughts in different places...nalini

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Declan McHenry 17 November 2005

I have one of those places too David but this didn't quite get me there. I was left with an ambiguity: Your place or mine? A nice idea of a poem but I thought the last line superfluous. Escape versus inspiration perhaps.

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Tiyler Durden 17 November 2005

Was ok but reminded me of some other poem...

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