Fine Finish Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Fine Finish
What is fear?
Why one should cry for girl?
Or girl should be made to cry...
It is simply trying
You are definitely right.
When offer fight
For lovely association
And strengthen relation.
There may be minor scuffle
To add some more trouble
But that can be overcome
With strong wish to welcome
Love should not be made game
Then whole agony may fall as shame
It will be difficult to retrieve
So do not try or believe
It is simple feeling
Go for it for filling
The desire and wish
I may end in fine finish
there may be problems, but you can overcome them and end well Sydney Rain Sterzik5 minutes ago i liked this poem, it is well structured, and i can relate to the feelings. good job! Comment +1
Couldn't understand David Cephus2 minutes ago It was hard for me to grab and hold on to. I usually try to hear a voice and I couldn't here. Perhaps because I couldn't understand your message and lacked some flow. Keep on writing and express yourself in different topics.
it is a matter to think, though simple sir. please see my new poems ,
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very nice Sam G5 minutes ago A moving poem you wrote Comment +1