M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,438 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Finger Ring - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Many may not know the pain she went through
But the finger ring does
Ring was there with her in thick and thin
Ring has seen the good and the bad
The joy with which it came to the hand
And the pain it felt from love that drained

Ring alone is left in hand
When fate moved on
Luck elusive as ever
Ring will go till end…

Ring celebrated all ceremonies
Have seen the agony of alimony
Now fingers are weak
Still ring is intact
Great lesson it teaches to all

Topic(s) of this poem: love, memoir, memories

Form: Ballad

Comments about Finger Ring by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/4/2015 4:41:00 AM)

    Nicely penned poem, Asim (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/4/2015 12:05:00 PM)

    A companion of good and bad days from young to old age- a ring.... unique thought and sensible presentation.. loved it (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/4/2015 1:32:00 PM)

    Thank u so much SN....I really admire your appetite for poems. You are a wonderful poetess....May God bless you and increase your imagination and writing power.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 4, 2015

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