M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,492 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Fragrance - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Thorn piercing blood from stem
to make rose ever red
blossoms it to attract
every eye and win all heart in process

The pain and suffering of thorn
never goes in vain
despite fables spread across
to undermine the supreme sacrifice

Red rose truly acknowledges
by carrying toughness inside
and fragrance outside
to reach one and all.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Fragrance by M. Asim Nehal

  • The Poet Poet (9/4/2017 12:18:00 PM)


    I am very glad to know
    that you are a great poet here
    most just praise
    to get their poetry read

    i see the value of a poet
    who helps and critiques well
    so as to develop the poet
    new
    afresh
    as you do
    O poet


    todays roses
    come in a myriad hues
    how one red roses blood
    will do
    at times I wonder too
    I am just a thorn out of the blue
    would you like to read me too
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/1/2017 1:14:00 PM)

    Amazing comment......For sure, I will (IA) .

    2 person liked.
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (5/17/2016 11:50:00 AM)


    Well written, well depicted, please read my poemaroma
    And give me your suggestions.
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/23/2016 2:49:00 PM)

    Thanks Mr. V.R Iyer

  • Yasmin Khan (4/15/2016 9:42:00 AM)


    Truely beautiful, beauty blossoms out of pain. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/24/2016 1:17:00 PM)

    Thank u Y. Khan

  • Sonali Ganguly (4/15/2016 8:48:00 AM)


    wow...... wonderful, fantastic poem (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/23/2016 2:49:00 PM)

    Thanks much Sona.

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/10/2016 9:13:00 AM)


    A wonderful imagination............................................ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/23/2016 2:49:00 PM)

    Thanks Janab Akhtar Saheb

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/1/2016 8:14:00 AM)


    To attract every eye! With the aroma of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/23/2016 2:48:00 PM)

    Thanks my friend, Edward

  • Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/24/2016 10:36:00 AM)


    Asimji... You have reflected the true beauty of life through your poem. Thorn is the struggles we face and the rose is the beautiful result of our struggles.10++++++ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (4/9/2016 11:52:00 PM)

    Thanks much Uzefaji.

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/21/2016 11:27:00 PM)


    Red rose truly acknowledges
    by carrying toughness inside
    and fragrance outside
    to reach one and all. To reach the one and all... at the end you become mystical in your thoughts and cogitations. thank you dear poet. tony
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/22/2016 2:12:00 PM)

    Thank u so much for lovely comment.

  • (12/21/2015 7:04:00 AM)


    Outstanding poem, this fragrance will spread like wild fire, Man (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/23/2015 1:32:00 PM)

    Thx much.....DJ

  • The Poet Poet (12/5/2015 7:26:00 PM)


    todays roses
    come in a myriad hues
    how one red roses blood
    will do
    at times i wonder too
    I am just a thorn out of the blue
    would you like to read me too
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/23/2015 1:31:00 PM)

    Thanks much Poet.....

  • Kewayne Wadley (11/30/2015 2:50:00 PM)


    Great story of the sacrifice that lies with passion! +10
    Beautifully written.
    KW
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/21/2015 3:06:00 PM)

    Thanks much KW..I appreciate,

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/29/2015 11:27:00 PM)


    Verily, hiding pain and expressing mirth is a great
    therapy to a happy and successful life.
    A fine similitude.
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/21/2015 3:06:00 PM)

    Thanks much Brother Abdulrazak...

  • Bharati Nayak (11/29/2015 9:05:00 PM)


    Hiding pain inside rose smiles outside and spread its fragrance.Such an apt and beautiful metaphor for life! (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/21/2015 3:05:00 PM)

    Thanks much BN, I appreciate.

  • Hazel Durham (11/24/2015 4:30:00 PM)


    The pain and suffering in life can bloom into something wonderful that is happiness that has endured the hard lessons of fate and destiny!
    Stunning write!
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/27/2015 3:22:00 AM)

    Thanks much Maa'm, Always cherish your comments.

  • (11/23/2015 12:03:00 AM)


    to hold suffering and spread love! wonderful poem
    thanks Asim
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/2/2016 3:25:00 PM)

    Thank u so much Loke....

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/22/2015 10:11:00 PM)


    A lovely poetic imagery............................................ (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/30/2015 4:34:00 AM)

    Thanks much Janab...

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/22/2015 12:28:00 PM)


    Yes, yes The pain and suffering of thorn never goes in vain because red rose recognizes pure happiness in life even sitting in throne of thorns. Wonderful imagery is drawn here definitely. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/8/2016 2:12:00 PM)

    Thx much Sir............

  • (11/22/2015 10:15:00 AM)


    Wonderful fragrance of life in rose form, You amaze me with your every poem Man. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/2/2016 3:26:00 PM)

    Thank u Darren J

  • (11/22/2015 10:07:00 AM)


    Awesome poem with rose as metaphor foe life,100++ (Report) Reply

    T Rajan Evol (7/25/2016 2:16:00 PM)

    When ever i re-read this poem I feel inspired.

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/30/2016 4:54:00 AM)

    Thanks much T Rajanji

  • Souren Mondal (11/22/2015 8:51:00 AM)


    The rose can be beautiful, but the rose's beauty comes at a price... As Kelly said below me, supremely metaphorical and one of your best poems that I have read Asim.. Thanks for sharing this... (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/29/2015 12:43:00 PM)

    Thanks much Souren.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 22, 2015



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