Fragrance Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Fragrance

Rating: 4.8


Thorn pierces blood from stem,
to make rose ever red.
Blossoms it to attract every eye,
and win all heart in the process.

The pain and suffering of thorn
never goes in vain,
despite fables spread across,
to undermine the supreme sacrifice.

Red rose truly acknowledges
by carrying toughness inside
and fragrance outside
to reach one and all.

Sunday, November 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 17 October 2020

No matter how many times you read this poem every time you find something new clicking in your mind thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.....

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Brutry Brara 11 October 2020

One of its kind poem on sacrifice and love.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Thx much Brutry./

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 October 2020

The pain and suffering of thorn never goes in vain, despite fables spread across, to undermine the supreme sacrifice.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Thx.. Darren.

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Another far reaching and beautiful poem!

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me poet yeps poet 31 May 2022

HELLO MAN YOU R THE BEST POETMAN

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Vidyapati Jalan 04 February 2022

🌹 and its fragrance around me.

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Kevin Patrick 22 December 2021

A stellar write, how something as beautiful as a rose can still cause pain, yet carry beauty. wonderful work

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David Wood 22 December 2021

When you refer to the one you love you refer her to a rose. Soft yet tough with a fragrant scent. A good 5*

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