Firm Land Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Firm Land

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I have often said and reiterate today
There is no other go or clear way
Never claim” we are poor human being”
“Human is to err” and so on to bring in between

As clouds cover the sun for a moment
It shall not be counted as darkness with movement
It is temporarily extended out of ignorance
The sun has its permanent prominence

Shine always with one thought
Nothing is available easily without being fought
You may have some tendency to feel bad
But believe in one thing” There is no reason to feel sad”

You will always find firm land
Where countless creatures crave for friends
Look at sky and raise head in recognition
Almighty favors grace for new relation

He has different kind of equation
Only we need to believe in his creation
We are here to serve his cause
Not because we feel something and altogether miss

Little intelligence in mind forbids us
To think high and question trust
There is only one belief and faith
And that must remain till the death

Friday, March 28, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

I have often said and reiterate today There is no other go or clear way

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

welcome shujat ahmed 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

Maricela Ramírez likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

Nice Robert Rogers7 minutes ago It is temporarily extended out of ignorance The sun has its permanent prominence...very nice phrase I would have liked it much more if the flow was smoother and your rhymes were not so often forced! ...but nice anyway Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

Very uplifting! David Garland9 minutes ago I am quite impressed with your write, very, very good, Such a positive approach, very truthful written with an authentic air. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

religiion J Jimenez10 minutes ago not much a fan of religion

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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