Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 517,451 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

First And Last - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Never have remorse
You are queen of course
You are always near to heart
My life and very much part

I know how you feel
But my intention is not to kill
But keep to chest
And give you best

You were one of the beautiful creatures
And I made it very clear
“I shall hold you till last”
You shall be first and last in life

Many times I think and wonder
What should I do something special and offer!
I must make you happy all the times
As you always had fragrance as if from perfumes

We had vowed
And allowed
Our fancy to roam around
You were natural choice to be found

I find something is worrying you
You are dreaming day time and carrying
Full load of tension
I, sometimes, remain confused for relation

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Comments about First And Last by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/2/2015 1:37:00 AM)


    A musing great n interesting poem about a daughter it seems. Young daughters have many daydreams n tensions in modern times. U wrote it in a super fatherly way. Thumbs up. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2015 9:07:00 PM)


    I find something is worrying you
    You are dreaming day time and carrying
    Full load of tension
    I, sometimes, remain confused for relation
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 2, 2015


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