First Entry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
First Entry
My first entry on net was so dramatic
She was first to be seen as very much dynamic
Knowledgeable and straight forward in dealing
Sympathetic to hearing and almost willing
'You got to be gentleman and respectful'
'Since you are new, I shall wish you to be successful'
'But be polite in language and use of no dual language'
'Else you will be taken tare off and managed'
Such was her first appearance
It was just by unique chance
She had own business to look after
Built with own efforts and with the help from others
She was right in claiming tall position
It matched with her talent to result in nice composition
She had to look after vast empire
More and more to progress and acquire
She had an excellent class of quick grasp
She will never fall in controversy or trap
She had her own collection of poems
So much authentic and flowing from stream
I learned my first lesson form her skill
For me she was very inspiration and skill
She did all the possible to guide and lead
I was thus so near to her and well read
I will not dwell anything about her misfortune
As it may be well out of place and tune
She has come to stay of her own
Excelled in own class and became well known
I wish her all success in life
Even though she is far off and facing strife
Time may swing in her favor
She may lead again with dignity and honor
Persian Khushi likes this. Persian Khushi they have tried to silence in many ways but failed hopelessly misfortunes mere tests frm above We have bond that grows wth time 17 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Persian Khushi “a bond made in heaven” we have a unique bond, strengthened over a period of time, over four years to be exact. a gentleman, an uncle in a million. a great poet, a friend, and an advisor, I am truly blessed with the best uncle anyone could wish for a man of compassion for whom I have great respect my uncle dearest and I his niece never a word out of place thank you Uncle dearest for keeping me in prayers and always wishing for me the best 4 hours ago · Like
Persian Khushi likes this. Persian Khushi they have tried to silence in many ways but failed hopelessly misfortunes mere tests frm above We have bond that grows wth time Yesterday at 1: 09pm · Unlike · 1
Heather Burns nice first entry. 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1
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Classical Cow searioully we are know that about she/mean story about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
Sabeen Rashid What a pleasant turn of events! You are thrilled...and it shows...it's like a sudden burst of sunshine on an otherwise dull day, isn't it? So much to look forward to now....hope this brightness all around, is here to stay... :) 2 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1
Heather Burns extra nice writing in your first entry. 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1
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My first entry on net was so dramatic She was first to be seen as very much dynamic Knowledgeable and straight forward in dealing Sympathetic to hearing and almost willing