First Ever Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

First Ever

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I fell for her first time
It happens sometimes
You won’t know
But luck swings and favorably go

It is like pendulum
Goes to end and comes back to keep mum
Only tick tick
But no trick

I wonder about first love
And silently believe
Is it her really?
I gaze but feel cheerfully

She says” I am shocked”
I felt love was smoked
She came again with positive answer
I felt it cool from rainy shower

“it is so fast” she again spoke
“I feel it must last” I joked
There can not be delay in admission
Love is after all divine relation

“We will think over” I spoke in gentle tone
“I find assertion and cover” as enough was done
She had something in mind
I really found her very kind

I failed to dare
But told her to take care
No hurry for falling in real love
That shall happen any time when sincerely believe

Wednesday, May 28, 2014
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I fell for her first time It happens sometimes

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Lena Bassford can we dance now...lol 6 mins · Unlike · 1

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Open to the possibility. Tracy Bollinger3 minutes ago It was truly heart-warming your description of such maturity and tangible joy in falling in love!

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Very thoughtful Joshua Youngs5 minutes ago I liked it very much. Comment +1

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Gajanan Mishra 28 May 2014

falling in real love, I like it sir, great write.

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Awww Jaden Brooks6 minutes ago Great poem, it touched me!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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