Not Long Left

Rookie (17.05.1981 / The Molten Core)

First Kiss - Poem by Not Long Left

Always dissapoinment.
nervously smiling, sweating uncomfortably.
bad breath fearing.
together lips entwining.
is that it?
-first kiss-
that it is:
entwining lips together
fearing bad breath
uncomfortably sweating, smiling nervously.
dissapointment always.


Comments about First Kiss by Not Long Left

  • john tiong chunghoo (7/7/2006 3:11:00 AM)


    first kiss
    her dreamy eyes
    the whole week
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  • (11/5/2005 6:27:00 AM)


    Each and every one of us has been here at some time. good use of slow and fast pace to bring out the youthful hesitancy. Very poignant. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 27, 2005



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