First Love! Poem by Parishay Fatima

First Love!

Rating: 4.3


I like the rain drops;
When they fall from the sky
On me!

I like the tear Drops;
When they fall from my eyes
When I think of you!

I like my smile;
When it comes to my lips
When I think of you!

I like my eyes;
When they shine and blink
Every time I see you!

I totally like me;
Because I'm completely you!

Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 December 2017

Wow that's so cool. Good

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2017

Such a fabulous poem. I liked the way you interpreted your love for some close to your heart

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Chinedu Dike 13 December 2017

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Parishay.

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Parishay Fatima 13 December 2017

Thanks for appreciating.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 December 2017

rain drops, eyes, smile, tears, life, soul I totally like me; Because I'm completely you! very nice and lovely thoughts and emotions portrayed in simple lines.. like it very much. tony

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Parishay Fatima 13 December 2017

Glad to hear it!

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