First Love Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

First Love

Rating: 5.0


I’ve been around the block a time or two.
Long since; I lost my childish innocence.
For what I lost I gained some recompense.
One of the bitter lessons life has taught.
I loved her: She loved me or so I thought.
Her practiced lies defeated my defence.
I fell because I lacked experience.
I was a toy to her just something new
to play with for a while and then discard.
I was seduced, betrayed and cast aside
to satisfy her selfish vanity.
I learned to cope but found the lesson hard.
So now I view romance suspiciously.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Perryman 10 October 2007

Hi Poet, Sad and Beautiful poem.... This reminds me of a song....'The First Cut Is The Deepest, ' It is sad, but it happens to most of us. Because our hearts have been broken, when we find our true love, we understand its beauty, it is a never ending gift, most precious. Brilliant, poetry......'ENJOYED'

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Kerrial Newham 28 July 2007

Great poem, i like it, very explanatory and deep i know i am young, but i have felt the same you're all numb inside, like your soul is frozzen then you build a huge wall with gards to protect yourself nice poem.

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Angela Norris 25 July 2007

I couldn't read to the end...It was that good.

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Ernestine Northover 18 July 2007

I really enjoyed this write, Ivor. Beautifully explained and produced. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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