Thursday, September 6, 2007

First New Born Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cupped
carefully
in the palms
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Dónall Dempsey
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Chuck Audette 06 September 2007

New father here, agreeing completely. Simple, yet touching poem. -chuck

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Dee Dee Wright 06 September 2007

Love 'cupped carefully' just the sound and the feel of the words. Also 'mystery fleshed into being' Loved the fact that today is also a great mystery! The baby is near enough to look back and see and just starting to look this way for the dicky bird! Lovely touching poem. Dee DeeXXX

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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