First Poem Poem by Gabriella Diane

First Poem

Rating: 3.8


the cliche
the without you, i wouldnt
the your this your that
the your everything

the phone calls at 3 in the morning
the phone calls at 7 am
the you make me feel beautiful
bliss without end

the glory of love
the passion of glory of love
and the borderline obsession

the what gets me the through each day
the sunshine in the rain
the you mean more than life

the this is so cliche but
the i love you is just right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Devang Gandhi 07 March 2006

Excellence for a first poem. Keep posting and well done! ! ! Devang Gandhi

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Peter A. Crowther 06 March 2006

Good poem for a first posting. keep writing

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