First Time Poem by ritty patnaik

First Time

Rating: 4.6


first time,
when we met,
for a blink you
appeared, in
a moment
dissapeared.
in a deep
mesmerised way,
i was floating,
in a blissfull mind.
i feel........
waiting for you,
is my destiny,
waiting for eternity
is perhaps my fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 15 October 2009

very impessive expressions, ritty....what is the diff in fate n destiny, dear....plz let me know......

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Ejaz Khan 14 October 2009

Amazing expression in end lines, really enjoyed it!

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 October 2009

'waiting for you, is my destiny, waiting for eternity is perhaps my fate'.....very poetic and touching lines...I loved it ma'm..10

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