First Time Poem by ritty patnaik

First Time

Rating: 4.6


first time,
when we met,
for a blink you
appeared, in
a moment
dissapeared.
in a deep
mesmerised way,
i was floating,
in a blissfull mind.
i feel........
waiting for you,
is my destiny,
waiting for eternity
is perhaps my fate.

Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 15 October 2009

very impessive expressions, ritty....what is the diff in fate n destiny, dear....plz let me know......

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Ejaz Khan 14 October 2009

Amazing expression in end lines, really enjoyed it!

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 October 2009

'waiting for you, is my destiny, waiting for eternity is perhaps my fate'.....very poetic and touching lines...I loved it ma'm..10

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