First-Timers Poem by Fay Slimm

First-Timers

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It was a gold-leaf of an evening,
seeping its sheen above and between streaky lines
of sinking gilt clouds.

A mild and forebearing gleam
over-filled lovers' beginnings with exciting notions
of rush into searing emotion.

Clad only in hope, soulmates
overnighting became first-timers amazed at rise of
awesome desire for oneness.

Hazy maybe but we, guiltless,
came to seek love in abundance under a paradise
quilt if only for one single night.

Sure flight from fantasy occurs
only when seizing the real and we left behind all
pretend-time by the morning.

I remember Adventure Island,
and back in refurbished heat, rubbed with sweet
mem'ry love is burnished again.

Friday, January 13, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: exciting,fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Gogeshvili 24 January 2012

mem'ry love is burnished again. .................................... Hi, Fay - emotion's report very beautifully I am glad that still I listen to your voice here.. :) Tsira.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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