Fistral Surfers Poem by Fay Slimm

Fistral Surfers

Rating: 5.0


Grand champion hopes echo here each year
As, with summer heat, top class surfers meet
To crest the mighty waves. all leave the fear
Of giant rollers far behind, and sweeten
Judge's eye with feats of watery style,
All the while performing ballet- boarding
To the tune of crashing waves. Though beguiling
Like a drug, these surfing addicts afford
Respect at every turn, bow to mighty
Power of sea, yet rise again on next crest
Like Neptune's gods. At Fistral beach such heights
Are conquered only by the very best.
All mediocre wet - suits stay away
From water then, and watch the aces play.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 20 March 2009

I have spent many happy hours watching the surfers on Fistral beach Fay...you have captured them beautifully...thank you...Fi 10++++

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Sue Sie 20 March 2009

Wow what a scene you set here in your verse Fay...a great picture of the surfers riding the white horses...great write...10++

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Sid John Gardner. 20 March 2009

Can see you on the crest of the next roller Fay... Nice tribute to those white horses of the sea....and their courageous skilfull riders. Sid x.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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