Fish Die In Full View Of The Water Poem by Patti Masterman

Fish Die In Full View Of The Water

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Fish die in full view of the water,
Birds die at the very edge of sky;
Love can die when there’s no room to grow in,
Like the wind, for a stopping place sighs.

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2011

Fish die in full view of the water, -not because of drowning but toxic polluting...toxic of greediness Birds die at the very edge of sky; -Because the soul fly above while body fallen below....too much ego kill soul Love can die when there’s no room to grow in, -The best room to grow is in heart, warm for soul to park Like the wind, for a stopping place sighs. -Across all the distance bringing all the heartbreak and watch over happiness, monitoring life side black or white It is nice write Patti...wonderful sight! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Ace Of Black Hearts 28 June 2011

Brilliant Poem, And Its So True.

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