Fish Pond At 60 Poem by William F Dougherty

Fish Pond At 60



Year by year the pond
puckered into marsh,
stifling the orange carp

that hung within its reeds
feints of light
in silt-drab water,

glints long wasted
bleached to spines
cling to mud banks

slick as frog skin.
Sunk among cattails,
bowsprit of odysseys,

a boy's skiff decays
while the last pulse of pond
seeps away from itself like a stain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 13 September 2015

I started out by reading the Cancer Sonnets and then read this. I like your simplicity and descriptive imagery here. No need for iambic pentameter or complexity. The message, the imagery is quite clear.... Unlike your aging pond.

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William F Dougherty 25 July 2012

Reflects transformation of aging visitor.

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Walterrean Salley 24 July 2012

Clear picture. Quite a transformation of the ole pond. Interesting to observe.

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2012

Very descriptive and interesting write.

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