Flame Poem by hiba Gamera

Flame

Rating: 5.0


Oh dear, the beholder of my lost heart
How could I live with it in your weak hands?
In this world where hell seems closer than paradise
Oh dear, how about giving it back to the poor soul of mine
So I could be the cheerful human I used to be in the past
The skies are crying and I'm freezing waiting for your light
Oh my dear, I'm still praying in the dark
Waiting for your warmth tempting me from far
Oh, oh, I close my eyes the sweetness of your breath
Through monochrome the memory lingers
Oh my beloved, sealing my faith with your love
spare my fragile heart melting into your hands
my dear, let us clear the way to our l destiny

Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to a man whom I loved, but unfortunatly it was unsided, and words were the only way to reach him
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

An impressive rendition that resonates with the soul. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Hiba and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Hiba. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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