Flaming Red Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Flaming Red

Rating: 5.0


Her smile
captured

taken prisoner by the little compact mirror

snapped shut
put back in the bag

her frown
made more noticeable

by yet another application
of scarlet lipstick

her words smudged
by its shade

FLAMING RED!

worse still
when no words are said.

I rummage
in her bag

snap open
the compact mirror

release her smile

by applying
FLAMING RED

to my own
lips

I kiss her
leave a large lipstick kiss
on each cheek.

'You cheeky bugger! '
she laughs.

'It's so hard to stay mad at you! '

'Come here & I'll show you
how it's done properly(improperly) !

She kisses me she kisses me she kisses me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Pisapia 16 July 2007

A row centering on a kiss and a lipstick...what a conflict and what a resolve! I love her smile being taken prisoner by the little compact mirror. what a fantastic collation of detail to convery all its possibilites. I love the last line just getting lost in itself and that kiss. Flaming Red.. eh...must look it up and see what it does for me.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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