Floating Clouds Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Floating Clouds



Rising and falling, sleep overtaking then ebbing, giving
my mind different moods to write from, liking the beauty
of nature filling intellect.

Switching to clouds floating above, seeing all kinds of
things within them, puppies, birds, dragons, angels,
Jesus.

Fascinating how our minds work when seeing abstracts and
associating them with things that are real and actual,
delving next into desert plains.

Feeling the hot arid atmosphere bearing down upon me,
scanning the horizon, filling my mind with landscapes
of cacti, mesquite trees, and wildlife scampering about.

Life is filled with so many distractions naturally coming
to mind, giving ideas to write about, then quickly turn-
ing to watching people.

Writing impressions that come interiorly, feeling their
sadness, loss, grief, as I sense their emotions flowing
into my being.

Finding the words to write them into poems, describing
them with tears dripping down into my heart and mind all
the while writing them all into poetry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 07 September 2016

This poem is virtually a primer on how to write poetry by being alert, that is, a sustained effort at being alert to the world around you, sensitive to all of its manifestations, finding the right words to articulate the wonder of it. This can be an exhausting endeavor because you're all of your resources - intellect, feeling, senses - to pull everything together into that sense of wholeness which is also our mental health. After a half day of such concentrated poetic reverie, you will need the restorative virtues of sleep! !

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