***********florence Of Beauty********** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***********florence Of Beauty**********

Rating: 3.2


FLORENCE OF BEAUTY

Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love

oh what a glaze of whisper by cry of innocence
as redeemed beam of moon falling on silence
yet unflinches, basking in promises of ocean
heart revels up running on rungs sultry wishes

what a voices piercing through echo of conch shell
drumming on cochlea redounds stunning of resonance
oh what a thrills thrumming all through the green
the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven
yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk

oh what a virile fragrance diffuses through dream
as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven
eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow
smile lies back beneath half muffled veil of exuberance


Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love

oh what a glaze of whisper by cry of innocence
as redeemed beam of moon falling on silence
yet unflinches, basking in promises of ocean
heart revels up running on rungs sultry wishes

what a voices piercing through echo of conch shell
drumming on cochlea redounds stunning of resonance
oh what a thrills thrumming all through the green
the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven
yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk

oh what a virile fragrance diffuses through dream
as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven
eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow
smile lies back beneath half muffled veil of exuberance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sørensen 14 April 2009

Beautiful! It took my breath away and I could almost feel the air and the smells. Very well written: -)

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d arm 01 March 2009

beautiful and deep- great words

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Lalitha iyer 09 February 2009

Dear Dr., As usual your portrayal is beyond words. You are leaving nothing for others to write. You are drinking nature fully full and I am not hopeful that others would be left with something to unravel. I am extremely carried by the beauty of phrases like moonstuck lilly, redeemed beam, half muffled veil of exuberance, fledgling or fledging distant sky silhouetted.............REally I wonder what you mean more after reading three or four times for every time i find a new picture of the poem. I find that i have missed some deeper impressions when I read anew. I feel that I am not competent enough to fully understand the beauty you have expressed because at a single point of time you have both entered the world of figure as well as shapes and emotions and romantic affluence. I dont know really the more i read i feel there is more in it which i have missed to collect. Really these are gems of expression. I feel it is time for u to become a celebrity and wonder if u r really are. Are u teaching are u a professor or I am really interested in u. I am going to find it out.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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