Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 15,293 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Flowing Falls Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

The rolling river

journeys through forest chasm

joins at the crossroads

This is my entry for the poetry.com daily haiku contest.Some of my past written haiku were also entered.

Comments about Flowing Falls Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • (11/25/2008 11:11:00 AM)

    Billy Joe Collins,
    Haiku are very short poems that pack a wallop in meaning.Try writing a three line 5-7-5 syllable poem based on a picture-it's a real challenge to stay in the rule guidlines.
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  • (11/25/2008 9:54:00 AM)

    nicely said but a little short but dose read well (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 25, 2008

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