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Flying At Night

Rating: 3.9

Above us, stars. Beneath us, constellations.
Five billion miles away, a galaxy dies
like a snowflake falling on water. Below us,
some farmer, feeling the chill of that distant death,
snaps on his yard light, drawing his sheds and barn
back into the little system of his care.
All night, the cities, like shimmering novas,
tug with bright streets at lonely lights like his.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leon Adrian 20 September 2006

Your poem captures something that has never been felt before. I am greatful that there is a poet that stands out amoungst the crowd. I would love to send you some of my poems... just so you could workshop one or two. Please contact me at leon7potter@yahoo.com

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Hannah Kelly 05 May 2014

This is beautiful - I love the theme of space evoked.

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Saiom Shriver 23 April 2013

Five billion miles away, a galaxy dies like a snowflake falling on water. Magnificent

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Evelyn Morgan 05 May 2012

A magnificent universe out there all tied together by light. I loved it.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 24 September 2006

somehow, your poems are all of the space. you are probably from space. love this Ted. out in space the world so small (referring to our mother earth)

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Stephen Loomes 30 June 2018

All occurring in an infinite system of care, or meaninglessly random?

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Tom Allport 21 February 2017

an illuminating poem of what might be as we all swim in the sea of time?

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Seamus O Brian 18 September 2016

Tiny cogs lost in the vast machinery of the universe, but inextricably united to it. Wonderful.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 September 2016

A beautifully envisioned meaningful poem reflecting the force unifying the whole universe. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 18 September 2016

It shows that we are a part of a bigger arrangement. Anything happening in a distant space may have its impact of earth or so it is believed. Nicely portrayed. Thank you, Ted.

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