Follow The Wind Poem by me poet yeps poet

Follow The Wind

Rating: 5.0


Just follow the wind
where all does it go
as at my death
I too willbegin to flow

doc be assured
I'll take my hearing aids
so that I can still
hear your loving songs

glasses I'll very much need
else the morning sun's glare
I won't be able to directly stare

but your sweet face
will be indelibly implanted
on my mind's virtual screen

doc hold on
just tell me
where you will be seen

around heavens
have already surveyed once
every place and all seen
'tis just lovely
believe me

when you are in ICU again
let me know
I may also along with you go
two is always good company

HE will be happy
lesser for him
will be HIS worry
where to find for thee
some better symphony
like you'd love to have me

be happy
I will not
then bore ye
docky

Sunday, November 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,doctors,faith,heaven,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
WHEN in heaven
or on a train
to the wildest known domain
why on earth
for ever remain
malady abstain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 22 November 2020

This is one of your good creation. Nicely written and expressed.yes flowing with wind is wise but sometimes we need to mind the wind to lead us to right direction. Thank-you.

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2020

A very morose and somber read, hospitals are the beginning point and end point for so many of our lives journeys. The opening lines are beautiful and elegant. A well crafted work!

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