Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Following Polaris With Eyes On The Back Of My Head Comments

Rating: 5.0

Regardless of the direction in which I walk,
and because of this tumor that continues to grow
on the top back part of my shiny shaved head
people think I'm always staring at them...
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Ted Sheridan
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Audrey Stephenson 04 June 2008

Incredible Powerful Poignant Sheesh... very very well written.

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Callie Carroll 04 June 2008

Thank you for this poem. Especially gripping parts for me were 'It speaks only of pain..' 'pounds my love for life with the constant drumming of my own heartbeat..' (Your picture is a deadringer for my maternal uncle 15 years ago.)

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