Fool's Paradise Poem by shweta khosla

Fool's Paradise



O my dear,
you're gone
and it's all better!

only,
i'm surrounded
yet lonely

in pain,
without you,
my bane

painfully bored,
princes abound
but no toads

come back
there i've said it
my knight black

bring the lies
the clamour, the colour
of foo'ls paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

bring the lies the clamour, the colour of foo'ls paradise....... good write with application o f mind... i liked it... read mine 'fools parades too

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Shekhar Joshi 27 May 2009

romancing ain't my cup o tea....so fool's paradise is appropriate for it good work though

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Dr Kamran Haider 18 May 2009

Romanticism might be a fool's paradise but life would have been so futile without it. Nice write Shweta...

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Roopa Menon 15 May 2009

nice poem. keep writing

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