Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Footprints In The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the footprints in the sand
walking towards the sunset plumes.
I visualise in my mind
two lovers walking hand in hand
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David Harris
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bye bye... bye bye 29 October 2009

You only see the footprints but you make the reader visualize the individuals. A very good one...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 October 2009

wow! very good........................ Sir, it is alright if you're busy and don't have time to read mine because I don't want to block any task or any goal just because I insisted someone to read a poem of mine.

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Sandra Martyres 20 October 2009

You leave Lovely romantic footprints in the sand with this serene piece David...just beautiful

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Carol Gall 20 October 2009

lovely calm picture here geat write david 10

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Ernestine Northover 20 October 2009

Lovely picture you have conjured up here David, so dreamy and thoughtful. A pleasure to read it, leaves me with a Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sentimental me! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Harris

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