I see the footprints in the sand
walking towards the sunset plumes.
I visualise in my mind
two lovers walking hand in hand
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wow! very good........................ Sir, it is alright if you're busy and don't have time to read mine because I don't want to block any task or any goal just because I insisted someone to read a poem of mine.
You leave Lovely romantic footprints in the sand with this serene piece David...just beautiful
Lovely picture you have conjured up here David, so dreamy and thoughtful. A pleasure to read it, leaves me with a Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sentimental me! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
You only see the footprints but you make the reader visualize the individuals. A very good one...