For Crying Out Loud! - Out Loud Crying For? Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

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FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! - OUT LOUD CRYING FOR?


FOR flowering phrase amazing, glowing, preach
Creative writing’s serenade which may
Reader relieve from grief as poet’s play
Yearning to please, can tease, share ease, to teach
Innate truths another's mind may reach.
Natural talents help to show sure way
Greeting serene for those who felt life grey,
Offers shared joy. Imprinted on sheet’s bleach
Understanding seeks a pleasant niche
Teacher who? who pupil? - pupils weigh,
Light glance, as Cupid's dream darts dance, portray
Open heart: all’s all, each part of each.
Undo depression. Playful humor can
Defeat fears, tears, hope's brave new world's scope scan.

polyacrostic palimpsest palindrome sonnet
16 January 2007 revised 12 November 2008

for previous version see below

For Crying out Loud! - Out Loud Crying For?
FOR flowing phrase, amazing glowing preach
Creative writing’s darling buds of may
Reader preempts as, tempting, poet’s play
Yearning to please, to tease, share ease, to teach
Innate truths which other minds may reach
Natural talents help to show the way way
Greeting with light all who believed life grey
Of boredom filled. Black inkling’s on sheet’s bleach
Understanding seeks, a pleasant niche
Teacher who, who pupil? - pupils weigh,
Light glance dance, dart unspoken dart may say
‘Open heart: all’s all, each part of each.’
Underweather humours humor can
Depression wave away, brave new world scan




16 January 2007
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NOTES

First letter external acrostic FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! or LOUD OUT CRYING FOR?

First word of each line acrostic TOP DOWN

For flowering creative reader yearning, innate natural greeting offers understanding, light open. Undo defeat.

First word of each line acrostic BOTTOM UP

Defeat undo. Open light understanding offers, greeting natural, innate, yearning reader creative flowering for …?

Last word of each line creates TOP DOWN a unique sonnet

Preach
may
play,
teach,
reach
way,
grey
bleach.
Niche
weigh,
portray.
Each.
can
scan

Last word of each line creates BOTTOM UP a unique sonnet

Scan
can
each
say;
weigh
Niche,
bleach
grey.
Way
reach,
teach
portray,
may
preach

Poem © Jonathan Robin For Crying out Loud! - Out Loud Crying For?
polyacrostic palimpsest palindrome sonnet