For Now, I Am Winter Poem by Zachary Edmond Lockhart

For Now, I Am Winter

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After the last drops of rain, a silence emerges,
spreading as a crescendo of grey melancholy.

I open the window, light a cigarette,
feeling the cool night air run its fingers through my hair.

In the street below, leaves fall and scatter,
they look like people from up here.

I lift my eyes, and look at the evening stars overhead,
hanging in their silent repose.

The end of my cigarette quivers against a cool wind,
the night is extinguished-

For now, I am winter.

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,cigarettes,longing,seasons,soul,space,thinking ,winter,yearning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 19 January 2017

You paint such a peaceful and longing picture, I can almost smell your cigarette mixed with the fresh air after the rain. Good use of metaphor.

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I'm so glad that came through for you! it's simple moments like these, observational meditations, that I really enjoy out of life! Happy to hear from you :) will return the favor!

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Chinedu Dike 18 January 2017

Beautiful narrative piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks so much for your kind words :) please stick around for more work to come soon! I'll check your page out right now!

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