I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

For Us:

We're only just beginning,
and that's the hardest part,
so careful not to end it,
before we really start!
Discovering how to make you smile,
and subjects to avoid,
i listen as you take me back,
to times that you've enjoyed.
We've shared so little time so far,
but what we've hads been good,
i've felt more for you these past two weeks,
than i ever thought i could.
So, if you leave tomorrow,
i'll have but one regret,
and that's though i'll always love you,
i'll wish we never met...

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011

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  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (12/4/2007 4:32:00 PM)

    10/10 from me. This poem is beautiful! Just starting off is the hardest part... especially if you didn't know that person for awhile. Sorry it took me so long to comment... I've not been in using distance of a computer lol. I hope this person is Mr Right for you.
    Keep writing
    Rissa: -)

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  • Ben Gieske (11/21/2007 2:54:00 PM)

    Beginnings can be joyful and promising, but, as you say in the end, they can also be disappointing. Lots of feeling in your poem.

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  • Elle Thomas (11/13/2007 11:39:00 PM)

    i think it was really nice, however personally i think that the end part about never meeting wasnt necessary. it was such a sweet poem, if only it didnt have to end.

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  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (11/5/2007 3:59:00 PM)

    That's beautiful. I've had that feeling before too.l Great writing.

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  • Stef Mighty Moshin Emo Rangers (11/3/2007 9:14:00 PM)

    yeah, sometimes i feel that way too

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  • (red) harley (blue) suici (11/1/2007 5:28:00 PM)

    nice poem kaila keep on writing

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