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For Whom I Know Not...5 Comments

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Throes of desire
Throws me into ecstatic Helplessness

Tears of
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indira babbellapati
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2013

A beautiful poem. Some clarifications required: Why the throes of desire throw you into ecstatic helplessness? And why is the 'h' of helplessness capital? Tears flowing on the slopes of life is a beautiful idea. And the ardent call in the last stanza is the most beautiful.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Beautiful poem. Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

Tears flow on slopes of life making the way slippery. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

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