Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 412,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

For You To - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We shall never forget
When whole world was let
To know the facts about human disaster
Meanwhile the dead bodies moved faster

I feel for those bereaved
Not a respite for to be heaved
The incidence was shocking and not to be believed
Not single news made us to be relieved

Thousands got vanished in second's time
Not a whisper was heard in little time
They were all gone forever
We were crying and grieving over

This is poem with sad feeling
Almost touching heart and killing
The inner most soul for tragic event
That caused losses to resent

Those killed were Mothers
Somebody's beloved fathers
Sisters and brothers as well
No one is left for us as witness to tell

We feel your absence
In true spirit and its essence
Tears rush to express grief and sorrow
We are unsure of tomorrow

We are concerned with not for our future
But the way you left us to endure
All the pain and grief for days to come
We pray almighty to open doors for you to welcome

Above and all we pray for all
Who indulge in senseless killing call?
Not to take any innocent soul
Even for the considered to be noble


Comments about For You To by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 10:21:00 PM)


    Margaret Gudkov Your poem is grim sad and full of sentiment for dead souls who perished as a American and New Yorker i really appreciate this.. however you say there no witnesses..there plenty many people saw how others jumped from 100 floor to death cause they knew was no alternative there witnesses are firefighters and cops who risque their life for others many saved and also many died i still remember that day time stood still i was in brooklyn i never made to Manhattan i had appointment right across.. the panic the ashes flying all over the smell i came home i walked very long distance covered all with ashes we really thought war started about an hour ago · Like · 2 (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 10:20:00 PM)


    Herojit Philem We are unsure of tomorrow about an hour ago via mobile · Like · 2 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 10:19:00 PM)


    Jen Walls Mr. Mehta, I would very much like to admire you again for taking on such a terrible global calamity (9/11) . I would very much like to send you extensive edits that I would like to suggest to make this poem sparkle to the English speaking reader. Do you have chat available? If so, would you please turn it on. I will cut and paste it into chat or if you rather prefer e-mail send me a personal message and let me know how it is best to receive. Otherwise, I can cut and paste it a response directly on this page? Please let me know your preference...I promise not to do this with every one of your poems...but I felt the spiritual importance of your intent here! Thank you! about an hour ago · Like · 2 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 10:19:00 PM)


    Angela Wright27 minutes ago the poem ha (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 10:18:00 PM)


    Juan Trevino26 minutes ago Very powerful message. Well written and descriptive of a terrible event that the rest of the world may be unfamiliar with. Comment +1 okay (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:52:00 PM)


    Bambi
    Nice poem. Bambi 13.5 seconds ago.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:50:00 PM)


    Life has its value


    Kalai Selvi19 minutes ago
    Growing insecurity in the world we live triggers violence during frustrated moments. Senseless killing can end lives in seconds but the pain will exist for more days to come.
    Comment 0
    great work
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:50:00 PM)


    Cyndile20 minutes ago
    good job
    Comment 0
    Powerful message
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:27:00 PM)


    Powerful message


    Juan Trevino3 minutes ago
    Very powerful message. Well written and descriptive of a terrible event that the rest of the world may be unfamiliar with.
    Comment +1
    okay
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:26:00 PM)


    Angela Wright5 minutes ago
    the poem had good flow for most of it..overall poem was good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:07:00 PM)


    Bambi
    Nice poem. Bambi 13.5 seconds ago.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 9:22:00 AM)


    We shall never forget
    When whole world was let
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012



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