Kim Schilling

Rookie (1967 / Illinois)

Forbidden Love - Poem by Kim Schilling

Wandering the fissures of my mind
He observes what other have missed
Pain, sadness, hurt and loneliness
Sharing it in part with his own tender heart
He is real

Calling me out from my internal darkness
He challenges me to accept myself wholly
With tenderness and strength he speaks
Proscribed tales of cruelty and abandon
He is powerful

Staring deeply into arresting eyes
I hope to catch a part of him forever
Forbidden love to silence my soul
Knowing the dream is illusory for now
He is honorable

Money passes to the unknowing hand
Same time next week


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Comments about Forbidden Love by Kim Schilling

  • (10/19/2008 1:01:00 AM)


    Wow! Wow! Wow! Am I at twenty yet? Bill Grace (Report) Reply

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  • (8/26/2008 8:07:00 PM)


    an exploration of many levels - moving - excellent twist of an ending (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/26/2008 6:38:00 AM)


    A very nice piece.I do thank also for the info on www.voicesnet.com. i have gone through it but, hope to have enough time for this site too in the near future.

    Bye.

    E.K.L.
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  • (8/20/2008 11:48:00 AM)


    Brilliant! absolute brilliant. well penned and so touching. keep the good work moving........ (Report) Reply

  • Paul Butters (8/20/2008 10:41:00 AM)


    A surprise ending too! After the usual great insight into human, er, affairs? Keep on typing girl. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (8/18/2008 4:02:00 AM)


    o God! How realistic you are! We are in the same boat of thoughts. Shanmugam Chettiar (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (8/15/2008 12:09:00 PM)


    Same time next week - came in as a surprise. Beautifully scribed. Best wishes Fay Slimm Corwall U.K. (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2008 3:11:00 AM)


    Most profound. The ending was quite a surpise. Really enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2008 2:51:00 PM)


    If I understand this poem, and I think I do. It is a common thing that happens
    every day. I often wonder what is inside the mind of women. This is a portal.
    Dare we all look through?

    GW62
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  • (4/9/2008 3:52:00 PM)


    Lovely twist. I love the structure of your poems.

    F
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 5, 2008


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