Forbidden Love Poem by Kim Schilling

Forbidden Love

Rating: 5.0


Wandering the fissures of my mind
He observes what other have missed
Pain, sadness, hurt and loneliness
Sharing it in part with his own tender heart
He is real

Calling me out from my internal darkness
He challenges me to accept myself wholly
With tenderness and strength he speaks
Proscribed tales of cruelty and abandon
He is powerful

Staring deeply into arresting eyes
I hope to catch a part of him forever
Forbidden love to silence my soul
Knowing the dream is illusory for now
He is honorable

Money passes to the unknowing hand
Same time next week


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Flora Gillingham 09 April 2008

Lovely twist. I love the structure of your poems. F

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Greenwolfe 1962 16 June 2008

If I understand this poem, and I think I do. It is a common thing that happens every day. I often wonder what is inside the mind of women. This is a portal. Dare we all look through? GW62

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Original Unknown Girl 15 August 2008

Most profound. The ending was quite a surpise. Really enjoyed reading this. HG: -) xx

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Fay Slimm 15 August 2008

Same time next week - came in as a surprise. Beautifully scribed. Best wishes Fay Slimm Corwall U.K.

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Bill Grace 19 October 2008

Wow! Wow! Wow! Am I at twenty yet? Bill Grace

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William E Marks 26 August 2008

an exploration of many levels - moving - excellent twist of an ending

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Falusi Mobolaji 20 August 2008

Brilliant! absolute brilliant. well penned and so touching. keep the good work moving........

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Paul Butters 20 August 2008

A surprise ending too! After the usual great insight into human, er, affairs? Keep on typing girl.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2008

o God! How realistic you are! We are in the same boat of thoughts. Shanmugam Chettiar

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