Forbidden Love Poem by Kevin Fisher

Forbidden Love

Rating: 4.9


I was training in hell when I heard the sound
A voice, her voice, my heart was bound
Love between a demon and a human is forbidden
So I'll be in the shadows completely hidden
She saw me in the shadows and I looked into her eyes
Everyone around us just lays down and dies
This is love at first sight
The Demon of Blood who kills all night
And a weak human that sings such delight
This kind of love just isn't right.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Wes 23 May 2009

you were using the darkness from your soul to show the lightness of love. even forbidden love. great poem.

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Christina Phan 12 May 2009

this was amazing gd one i luv it its sound so scardely n koool 10+

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ah... forbidden love... i know of it.... i loved a demon once... and he cursed me so i can never love again... nicely done...

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Madison Yeater 30 March 2009

wow...LOVE IT! ! ! its so full of the VERY deep, emotional view of love at first sight. i think this is one of the best poems ive read in a while! !

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Adrian Esquivel-paredes 30 March 2009

dam that was great also funny

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