I walk this lonely road
No cars and no sign of life
The black burning street melting my flesh
I run to what looks to be a person but its only a mirage
Hours past and I'm starving
No life means no food
Way to hot I'm walking half nude
The sun hits me like a bullet barrage
I'm feeling lonely
No one to hold me
I begin to die
I wither and fry
D**n this endless road of nothing.
You are a strong person who is not afraid to feel the loneliness and emptiness life can be sometimes. Your poetry is your catharsis and your creativity. Never stop feeling, no matter how painful the emotions can be. Stay strong. A 10!
Out of all your poems this one has to be my favorite. Its so strong and I can totally relate to it. Great job. Your an awesome poet, all of your work is great! ! ! ! <33Payyton
The poem suggests a way for life, very tough, excruciating solitude, which have to be accepted, after suffering, until the end. He needs his soul pair, which seems to be a kind of illusion in the desert of his loneliness.The sensation of death appears and he understand that the road has a terminus.Illusion of love can not save him and we do understand that the hunger is not just for food, the hunger may be spiritual.10++
i love this! ! ! last three lines are my favorite.... great ending +10
Dear poet, such a thoughtful write After writing these lines, now Look back, we readers are with you How can you be alone? Your Road of nothing Has been walked by most of us. But at times, we end up with cross points Take the right cross, you will find something That something will tell us the purpose of life. So all the best Good subject, good writing. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful poem. great imagery/ 10